The best birthday ever
I opened my eyes, everything looked so unfamiliar were was I , I kept on asking my self, then I remembered in was in VEGAS !!!! And today was November forth my birthday. I couldn’t wait till I got my birthday present I was so excited I couldn’t stop smiling i turn around to look at the time it was only five in the morning. I decided to go back to sleep there was no point on having to wait that long.
“ HAPPYBIRTHDAY TO YOU blah blah” everyone was singing
I was surrounded by my entire family and a muffin with a candle that said ten on it. I was so exited, this day was going to be awesome and know one or anything was going to stop it. But I never new this was going to be my worst birthday ever.
We walked for 30 minutes till we got to restaurant, It was a big buffet and I was small, i was lost for more then 20 minutes and at the first 5 minutes I burst into tears. When I finally rescue by a security guard and had eat I went to get dessert when I came back to the table a bunch of waiters were surrounding it with a big slice of cheese cake.
“ happy birthday drear RROOOUUUCCCHHHELLL !!!”
Obviously Atenas bursts out laughing, I was so embarrassed. For the entire morning Atenas wouldn’t stop calling me ROUCHEL, she only stopped when I rolled off the stairs in the Paris hotel and for the second time I cried, my new nickname was old baby. It was dinner time and tree horrible, embarrassing and dumb things had happen, the day couldn’t get worst I taught , well it did. We went to a pizza place and Atenas was making me laugh I took a sip of my coke and PUAGHH !!! I puked everything in my new jacket for the third time I cried. My birthday was over and the only thing I was hoping was that my eleventh birthday would be much better.
Another good topic Raquel! But...your grammar is still needing work! Try reading your sentences out loud to hear the natural pauses. Also type your essay up in Word first to find spelling errors, then copy and paste it onto your blog. Looking forward to next week!
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